Critique interim

After hanging our work up on the "north wall", we all examined each others work and the critique I received from my group was as follows.

The really like the ideas, the illustrated people versions worked better than the versions with a more symbolic approach. However they'd like to see cleaner illustrations.

More direction was required in the TSB arena version, because it felt a little put on the page.

They did however think that this illustration was the strongest and portrayed a good sense of excitement and energy.

The typography obviously required a lot of work and formatting, it was too large, there was too much, and it was generally quite messy. Grid work needed to be concentrated on a lot more aswell.

The Botanic gardens one required some more subtle depth but otherwise it was agreed that it was currently the strongest of the options.

Second strongest was the Bodega version, but some of the line work on the guitar needed to be stronger.